Checking my goal

I promised 3 goals.

No coffee, no yellow card, yes library.

I succeed 1 goal.
No coffee. It improved my health very much.

I can't succeed next goal, no yellow card.
I collected 3 yellow card in total. Not bad but it made me annoying.

I succeed last goal 50%, but I satisfied with it.
It improved my historic knowledge.

Argument essay_ Creationism is totally wrong!

Creationism?

Creationism and theory of evolution have fought over 200 years. Even in June, theologists insisted on editing the theory of evolution in textbooks. I strongly insist that creationism is totally wrong. Creationism is based on the Bible and God is just a desire and delusion of theologists. No one can prove God's existence and there are many faults in creationism.
    First, there are many fossils that can prove the evolution of living things. There are two main reasons that prove evolution theory. Whales are one of them. In the past, whales lived on land. And as time passed, they moved to the ocean.Fossils prove that, there were stages of change for whales. Whales changed their legs to fins and removed their furs. Not suddenly but over time. Theologists deny that truth and ask some questions. There are some missing blanks that science can't prove the exact process of evolution. But there are small entities of fossils discovered in almost all stages of evolution. Fossil layers teach us the approximate time of that age. And fossils are arranged on a timeline. Living things are evolved according to these fossils, and they prove that living things have evolved over time.
    Next, the Bible's stories are disproved by science. In the Bible, the universe was made in 4004 B. C. However, 6000 years are so short for living things to evolve. Today scientists have proven that Earth was made in 5 millard years ago. Living things evolved from very tiny things. Fossils are divided into layers and chronologically arranged.
    Some might argue that if all living things have evolved, the universe would have been made through coincidence. They claim that the universe is planned. However, evolution is derived from the environment; it causes evolution. There are many examples about evolution. First, during the industrial revolution, moths evolved black due to smoke. They tried to survive in a new environment and thus they changed color. Next example is giraffes. The short - neck giraffes no longer exist because long - neck giraffes survive easier, so they survived and evolved.
    Next, theologists believe in Noah's Ark. However, there is no evidence that Noah's Ark has existed. If there had been a big flood, geological evidence would remain. But there is no geological evidence. It is also clear that Noah couldn't load all kinds of animals and it the Bible, God made rain with pure water not salty water. However, Noah didn't rescue any fish. And, scientifically, no sea fish can live in that pure water. The Bible is wrong and absurd.
    Creationism and the theory of evolution are in constant conflict, even though there are many points that prove the theory of evolution. However, theologists keep insisting creationist theory. I strongly insist that creationism is an offspring of theology and God is just the desire o people who want to depend on religion.


Video about Noah's Ark
http://blog.naver.com/ehreh752/90130456008
(subtitle version)

Yes. It is true.

Flash Fiction

Frozen area

flash fiction

When I opened my eyes, two people were watching me. They stared me and shared some words, and walked to the fire. I turned my head right and I can see the crushed airplane. Just few hours ago, I was passenger of that airplane. But now, I'm one of the survivors in that airplane. I don't know where is here, but only thing I can notice is it is too cold place to live. I woke up and walked to fire because it was too cold.

There were four people around the fire. Silence continued long time, and one guy broke the silence. "There are no survivors without us, Just we are survivors." He stopped talking and put snow into the bucket. I turned my head right to left. Snow was surrounding us. One women, passed me one carriage bag. "That's your clothes, keep it safe." Bag was filled with canned foods and warm clothes. I removed snowflakes on the bag and put beside of the fire. "My name is Darius." he said his name while he move the bucket on the fire. "My name is Clara.", she said. She was the only woman of us, excluding me. Behind the fire, two guys said their names, Jack and Louis. Time was running and nothing happened. No planes, no signs of rescue. Louis had a GPS receiver, but it was needless and unhelpful. No one know where is here and what time it is. Sun didn't move and nothing in there excepting the snow. No animals, no insects, no moving things excluding us. Just some needle leaf trees were standing here and there. I opened my canned food, can tuna, and started to eat it. Approximately 6 hours passed, but it seems to be there might be no sunsets or sun's moving.

Times running, everyone fell a sleep. I slept with small blanket, I but blanket on my head and fell asleep. I woke up because of fire. I thrown some dried branches to the fire and looked around. 'One, two, three, and f,, where is four?' I checked people's face and I noticed that there was no Jack in here. Jack have disappeared. Louis woke up and recognize the situation. "Where is Jack?" We couldn't find any footprints of Jack. Snowy weather erased all of evidence and clues of him. We tried to find Jack, but no one could find him. I felt weird because of the dream. God came to me and said to me. I will be the survivor of this game and you can escape here. So I believed that I could become a survivor of this game , and Jack was just out of this game. And after this happening, no one could fell a sleep easily.

Everyone scared with sudden death and just stayed night. And just some days after, Louis have been murdered by Darius and Clara. Darius clipped him by ax, because he tried to steal the canned food of him and Clara's. time is running, and there were no food left. The only thing that they could eat full is just water. They drunk water because of hunger, starvation, but, no one could satisfied with it, only water. Clara claimed we must eat the stew of human meat. It was necessary because our no canned food were left. We ate tree bark, resins, roots of tree and human meat. We made stew of Louis, and it was terrible to eat. But, we need to take the protein for living, so it was necessary. One day, Darius walked to over the horizon, to find the way of escape. But finally he can see the ocean, and he could notice that it is big iceberg, and we were isolated.

I killed Darius in that night by my knife, and throw him to a ocean. Ocean became red, because of his bloods, and I backed to my base camp. I planned to kill Clara. And, I believed I can rescued by god, because of that dream. I vividly remember that dream, when Jack have disappeared.

Next day, I went to cliff with Clara because of researching of this isolated iceberg. Of course, it was lie. And next, reach to the cliff, and I push her on the cliff. She fell down, and drown. I waited for my god. But, no one came to here for rescue. But nothing was happened and I was fulled with rage. I am the survivor and, why god keep his words?
I wondered, and Jack appeared. "You are not survivor. You are just murder. He didn't said like that. Not you, but all of us dreamed like you. But, because of your greed of escaping, you blew up all of thing." I stepped back, because of dazing. And, just a second, I misstep and fell down to cliff.

Jack was not disappeared. He just predicted this happening, and waited the rescue.

And, Jack was a survivor.

diamante poem for my cards

Poem for My cards. 

Greencard

green need

glowing shining sparkling

happiness treasure rubbish trash

burning annoying disliking

red needless

Redcard

For my cards.

Lessons of movie "Brave", Response essay

Response essay of movie "Brave"

Brave trailer

Before I watched the movie, I believed that freedom is the best thing in my life more than any other things. However, after the movie ended, I recognized that there are more important things near me. One of those is my family. And the movie is about princess Merida who want to change her fate. And wile she tries to change her fate, there were some problems. Like her mother changing into a bear. And she had adventures to solve that problems and change her fate. There were 3 factors that gave lessons to me. Wisp, freedom, and parents.


First, it is wisp. Wisp gives her cake and leads to Mordi'u. It is her destiny, I believe that, if she was satisfied with her destiny, or she doesn't want to change her fate, she can't live a happy life. I think life is the consequences of challenging. We need to challenge in order to change our fate. If our fate is twisted, we have to untie the fate and make our life happier, but it is not very easy. We need a lot of efforts and time. In real life, the situation that our parents became bear should not be happen, but there might be other problems. But I don't believe in destiny. I just believe that we can make our future, and it might be challenging which brings risk, but if we never try to challenge, I believe that there are no reason why we are living.

Next, is freedom. As it is mentioned, I believe freedom is the best thing in my life. But I changed my mind, and now, I think freedom always requires our responsibility and liability. To get freedom, we have to take a lot of risk. They might threat our family or our favorite thing. Without liability and try to get freedom, we might lose more important than freedom like our family or friends. But freedom is important thing in life. Just more important things than freedom exist. We must not give up our freedom but freedom should always come with liability. If we are satisfied with all of those, we deserve to get freedom I believe. We just have to be careful that our liberty might hurt another people, because freedom must come with liability.

Last, it is parents. If I have conflict with my parents, I might find some middle points of our ideas. Parents do not always give correct and best answers to us. But I'm not denying that parents are one of the most important factors of our lives. Often, I have conflicts with my parents. But after this movie, I decided that I need to talk a lot with my family because it is the best way to know each other's opinions and adjust to the opinion. Parents and Children have different Ideas. If they only insist their own ideas only, parents become unhappy and take your freedom away, and it makes your fate twisted. That is why family is important factor of our lives.

To sum up, I got some lessons after I saw the movie, brave. I need to change or make my own fate my freedom brings risks and needs liability and responsibility.

Last, parents and family is the most important factor of our lives. Without family, or parents, it might bring twisted fate and no freedom.

ode ode ode ode odd ode odd ode for my odd yellow card

ODE to Yellow card.
dear. yellow card.

first draft

    When I saw your face the first time, I was so nervous that I can't breath anymore. It was the dormitory gate where I met you. And I got you. But I hate you. You always smile to me. But I always hate you. 

                                 you asked to me, what is my name, my class and my room number.

    Before I got you, you were just an sheet of colored paper. But, after I got you, you were filled with my information! You remembered all of mine. You 'll not forget me but I want to forget you. Go away and never come to me again! I wished...

never come to me plz yellow paper

    When you were not with me, I had a really good time and I believe that this great time will last ever, ever, ever, ever, and ever. But, you came to me without any signs or warns. You came to me with so sounds of footsteps, and no sounds of whisper. You just jumped in my heart. 

I hate you like burglar

    Why I met you again? Why I need to see you again? I want to throw you away! I want you to be hands of ash. I want to RIP you. 

I want you put in the fire.

    If I throw you in to the fire, you might change your cloth with red color. You 'll rush to me, and I 'll get some red cards. I want to see you with green dress. And I'll be a good friend with you. 

Gimme only green green green!

From your neighborhood Steve.

My goals on GLPS camp

I stuck in a rut last summer vacation I think. My daily routine is too boring.
Go academy, and come to my home and do homework.... It was continued.
But, In here, situation is different. So I want to setting GOALS that I want to achieve in here.

My first goal is read 10 English books while at GLPS camp.
I need to go to the library once every 3 days, and spend 1 hours reading english books.
Last, reduce my time of using my phone for web surfing.

Next goal is try to have more challenges in class.
I want to try to have many talks with my PAs and teachers, and next, I will try to participate in speech contest. Last, I want to ask many questions in my class.

That might be the fastest way of improving my English skills.

Last goal is drink less coffee during the GLPS camp.
I am too tired to study so I drunk some coffees in GLPS camp.
But If I go to sleep earlier and do not buy coffee, I can become healthy and I don't need to drink some coffee.

Those are all of my goals in GLPS camp.


And, I don't want to collect no more yellow cards.. :(