Argument essay_ Creationism is totally wrong!

Creationism?

Creationism and theory of evolution have fought over 200 years. Even in June, theologists insisted on editing the theory of evolution in textbooks. I strongly insist that creationism is totally wrong. Creationism is based on the Bible and God is just a desire and delusion of theologists. No one can prove God's existence and there are many faults in creationism.
    First, there are many fossils that can prove the evolution of living things. There are two main reasons that prove evolution theory. Whales are one of them. In the past, whales lived on land. And as time passed, they moved to the ocean.Fossils prove that, there were stages of change for whales. Whales changed their legs to fins and removed their furs. Not suddenly but over time. Theologists deny that truth and ask some questions. There are some missing blanks that science can't prove the exact process of evolution. But there are small entities of fossils discovered in almost all stages of evolution. Fossil layers teach us the approximate time of that age. And fossils are arranged on a timeline. Living things are evolved according to these fossils, and they prove that living things have evolved over time.
    Next, the Bible's stories are disproved by science. In the Bible, the universe was made in 4004 B. C. However, 6000 years are so short for living things to evolve. Today scientists have proven that Earth was made in 5 millard years ago. Living things evolved from very tiny things. Fossils are divided into layers and chronologically arranged.
    Some might argue that if all living things have evolved, the universe would have been made through coincidence. They claim that the universe is planned. However, evolution is derived from the environment; it causes evolution. There are many examples about evolution. First, during the industrial revolution, moths evolved black due to smoke. They tried to survive in a new environment and thus they changed color. Next example is giraffes. The short - neck giraffes no longer exist because long - neck giraffes survive easier, so they survived and evolved.
    Next, theologists believe in Noah's Ark. However, there is no evidence that Noah's Ark has existed. If there had been a big flood, geological evidence would remain. But there is no geological evidence. It is also clear that Noah couldn't load all kinds of animals and it the Bible, God made rain with pure water not salty water. However, Noah didn't rescue any fish. And, scientifically, no sea fish can live in that pure water. The Bible is wrong and absurd.
    Creationism and the theory of evolution are in constant conflict, even though there are many points that prove the theory of evolution. However, theologists keep insisting creationist theory. I strongly insist that creationism is an offspring of theology and God is just the desire o people who want to depend on religion.


Video about Noah's Ark
http://blog.naver.com/ehreh752/90130456008
(subtitle version)

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